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Talking to Myself
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Talking to Myself |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I find myself talking Though I’m alone in the house Nothing stirs here but me No cat, no dog, no mouse I laugh at my jokes Thinking I’m a clever one it echoes down the hall When punch line is done Don’t worry that I’ll succumb To madness or disease But don’t talk back because I’ve only myself to please It’s nice here in my aloneness No one jabbers endlessly Excuse me please, I must go I’m talking now to me. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
I too keep only the best of company. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and THIS? IS HOW NOVELS ARE WRITTEN....  |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
ROFL at this one. I can relate to this one. I talk to myself all the time...heck, I'm the only one who'll listen. Even the cat just gives me dirty looks unless she wants something. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I definitely hear ya! I also talk to myself especially in the mirror hehe. It's nice to know that I am not the only one who does it, I was begining to think I was a wacko : ) |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ROFL  Oh, this is good, Sharon! I'm not usually alone, but oft times wish I were...lol...I enjoyed this very much! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've found that it's ok to talk to yourself. . .it's when you answer yourself that you should start to worry. . . LOL I enjoyed this one deVine. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
 Thank you all!!! Being alone takes some getting used to...and there is that dangled participle again! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
superb....I have been there...though the silence sometimes screams at you....this is very good...like much... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
silence the golden truth echoed off walls meeting ceilings meeting walls meeting floors, waxed by the wane of vanishing voices heard, but not, a shot in the dark room, visited by frequent reality piped in, in tune with tunes, accentuating the difference of noise we sit alone poised allowing the rhythm of deaf ears, bereft of pain and want, the taunt of walls chiming the yes of a soul fully aware! i'm talking to me now since i am there! ----- i loved your poem, sharon... i hope it was ok that you inspired me to tag onto it... it's a beautiful thing, i feel, when others touch each others souls with words and your words did that to me and so, i wrote it down...... thank you, my friend..... truly!!!! uh oh... you there???am i talking to myself again??? LOL!!!!!! j/k |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Poet deVine, And you're telling your jokes to someone who always appreciates your humor. There's a guaranteed laugh. Fun write! ROFL |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Conversing with greatness?.....seems like the thing to do.  Enjoy the sound of your own voice..I have to listen to Sponge Bob and Square Pants and the Power Girls..~LAUGH.Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
The only irritating part is when I tell myself, "Not tonight...I have a headache!"  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Being alone is definitely a unique feeling. Enjoyed this much, deVine. All writing comes |
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