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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-11 08:08 PM


Poetess of online sweetness
So dear to heart
Words soothing this knight
Mind feeling her softness

Love swirling in kindness
Always a new surprise
Held her so tenderly
With imagination's arms

Never letting me down
Always there with support
More than I deserve
Still enjoying every minute

For she is beauty
Passion beyond greatest wishes
Embracing my very soul
Never touched her reality



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-11 08:14 PM


WoW!!  Robert...Karen will just love this.  Any woman would love to have a poem written for her but Startime is the sweetest one out here....I guess...and I love her...but, I DO have GREEN EYES! LOL...good write!  Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-11-11 08:17 PM


Robert...this is a beautiful tribute to
our Star....She is certainly deserving of
such wonderful thoughts...well said...

Larry C
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3 posted 2001-11-11 08:21 PM


Robert,
A nice tribute to a great lady!  
I have found this to be a mutual admiration society. But that's a good thing!  

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-12-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-11-11 08:26 PM


Well, I think she will be giggling and crying for joy at the same time when she reads this. A great write for a great lady.  
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5 posted 2001-11-11 08:29 PM




BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Such a  beautiful tribute to our sweet star, sweet Robert! (smiles) I love it, just as we all love her! (big hugggsssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-11-11 08:36 PM


a woman loves to see her name on a poem....makes her feel special. karen deserves this!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Startime
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7 posted 2001-11-11 08:54 PM


*sigh* Okay, now that the tears have cleared and I am just blushing and if I can stop shaking maybe I can say thank you. You have touched me deeply with this beautiful poem, Sir Robert. It has been so good having you for a friend. You were the first poet whose work I ever read and I have loved every one of your wonderful poems. Thank you, thank you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2001-11-11 08:57 PM


What a wonderful tribute to a lovely lady indeed Robert. Very much enjoyed your tender thoughts in this beautiful dedication.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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9 posted 2001-11-11 10:38 PM


What a lovely poem for our Karen. She is indeed a lady of great compassion and huge heart. Her Star certainly shines very brightly on these blue pages.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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