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From The Smile In Your Eyes
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From The Smile In Your Eyes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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From The Smile In Your Eyes Is it a twinkle I can see filled with such tenderness A strong face looking back at me more than I dare express Is it talent of words I feel as your poems reach their goals Who is this man with such appeal who reaches inner souls I see a man who knows of life tough battles you have won You have known much of joy and stife and learned love from The Son Your gentleness and love combined to wipe away our cries A man of love is well defined from the smile in your eyes Karen Torbiak ©2001 Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Such a beautiful and heartwarming tribute to every loving man! (sigh) God Bless You always and may love always fill your heart and all these special people who influence us all! You have sucha beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Its good to know that there ARE people out there who care.. I dont know how we could make it without special people such as that Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....from the smiles in your eyes I can see the feelings that you have expressed so well. The warm glow given to you shows in them and in your words as well....Nicely done shining Star.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I think I can see that smile before. Very well written, Karen. You write of such love and tenderness. I truly admire your work.  All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great work Karen! Much enjoyed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I know this feeling well...I married a smiling eyes man...first glance and he had me. There is surely a difference...a fulfillment inside those happy places. I love this Karen. Thank you so much. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked it arthur |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good, Startime! I enjoyed reading this. |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
It is nice to see some poems about the good guys and such a nice one at that. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
My dear Lady Karen, knowing how how much I love reading your beautiful poetry, this is one that there is no exception, loved it! Sir Robert
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Even masks allow for true eyes to be seen and through such portals is the honest view. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is such a beautiful tribute Karen ... wonderfully expressive, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Wow, I know a man like that!! and I am proud to say he's all mine! Glad you have one too!! I enjoyed your poem. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Startime, an incredible write here! Really awesome. I loved the title, too. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is a very lovely piece of writing for someone. Anyone we know? Certainly sounds like a very special person. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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