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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Lavender Butterflies By: Noah Eaton 11/11/01 In crisp fields of lavender butterflies Imbued by the violet stars in a dreamscape horizon Fluttering by through a Technicolor past Sliding among rainbows into sunny futures uncertain Where the turquoise house rests on the rainbows ridge Where sheer dreams cascade into reality’s realm Upon jade waters where porcelain dolphins kiss the glass abyss Hazed by myriads of gardenia, where the cherubs dwell Among barley fields frosted in pearl hail Feathered in cotton lovers whispers Where kites are flown against the satin wind Reflecting reveries upon beds of heather In strawberry fields glazed in whipped cream I lay and dream the days away with lavender butterflies of dreams in harmony Waiting for my sweet angel to bring music to my world Sailing away with her into myriads of fantasies… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-11-2001).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
What a wonderfully fantasy filled poem.. I liked it very much.. reminded me of childhood dreams of butterfly filled fields.. Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ah, the world of fantasy and make believe. There is none like it anywhere. You've written of it well, my dear friend. You're work always amazes me, Noah. Thank you!  All writing comes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hope one catches your eye Noah and if she does go after her and keep trying...sometimes it takes awhile for things to happen...for hearts to soften...and if it doesn't work keep searching til you find the right one or she finds you...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Strawberry fields forever..... Shining moments await Noah. A truly beautiful write.Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
You certainly painted a vivid picture with these words. Very cool. Thanks. David2 |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
Noah, I love this one. It is vivid and flows so well with so many colors. This is as good as anything I have seen for a while. IMHO Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Wanda Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 461 |
Noah; I love your poems of fantasy. Keep writing my friend. Wanda |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, your writing is FAR more sophisticated than your age. DO, please nurture your talent every chance you get. it truly is a gift. Love Annie |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Sweet Noah... If I was a butterfly I would fly to where you are and share all the beauty of nature with you love, RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
BEAUTIFUL NOAH!!! Well done my friend! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, how nice to "see" you, and to read your beautiful lavender poem. Your poems truly get more and more wonderful each day. Sandra |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh my oh my Mistletoe, this poem of your's is sooooooooo precious... I shall be keeping this one sweetie4many more reads! SmilesNhugs2u *~coco~* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Well, you already know how much I love butterflies  and your poem was a pleasure to read, you have some fantastic imagery in this, and, you have such a mesmerizing way with words! Into my library this goes  Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, I can close my eyes and see the beautiful world you describe. Just lovely.  Hugs, Tara |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Noah ... It's so wonderful to "see" you! This is a beautifully delicate and descriptive piece ... magical and flowing indeed, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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