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Still Waters |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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You find yourself in Still waters, the moonlight Silhouetting the sky In distant journeys I have walked alone, I have read aloud, The words of many strangers That live close to the Waters edge and dance in Solitary ballets of time Could you be in that shadow Among the wind, where lonely Leaves fall as autumn blows Softly in, are you that glider on The ice, cold and frigid waiting for Death to take form The night again Surrounds me in dark streams winding Slowly away from earth Home you’d say, sing proudly When the dream comes true ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
dance in Solitary ballets of time This is very very beautiful....Enjoyed!
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You find yourself in Still waters, the moonlight Silhouetting the sky In distant journeys I have walked alone, I have read aloud, The words of many strangers That live close to the Waters edge and dance in Solitary ballets of time =================================== see where wishing on emerald stars gets me  thank you ... tis been far too long since your graceful words have danced here... this is of course beautiful and touching... Good to see your smiling eyes here my dear.  jmWell tomorrow holds only mystery |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is beautifully written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ 'In distant journeys I have walked alone, I have read aloud, The words of many strangers That live close to the Waters edge and dance in Solitary ballets of time Could you be in that shadow Among the wind, where lonely Leaves fall as autumn blows' My stars this is lovely~ I am so very glad to see your voice of poetic passion~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am so glad to read you again, it has been too long, but it was well worth the wait, this was lovely. ~Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self~ Cyril Connolly |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I have read aloud, The words of many strangers That live close to the Waters edge and dance in Solitary ballets of time Sounds so much like what we do here on PIP.. will be looking for more of your poetry. [This message has been edited by Songbird (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren, your beautiful words have been so missed.....your sight, your soul have been missed. This is lovely Lady Lauren. Stunning write hon. HUGS TO YOU! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes, A lovely write, enjoyed |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
good to come back and read your words, this is lovely! Kathleen |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very beautiful imagery here, my friend. Loved it! (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Enchantress-- what a lovely response, thank you very much... Janet Marie--My dear friend in understanding, I am grateful you do....thank you so much....  Midnitesun-- I appreciate you dropping by to read, thanks much for your kind words... Marge-- Thanks for the welcome back, I too have missed being here.... JamesMichael-- Thank you for enjoying...I appreciate the kind words... Sharon-- I am so glad you enjoyed this, thank you, it means much to me...  Sonbird-- you picked one of my favorite verses, thank you.... Gentle Spirit-- wow hon, what a welcome back...you know I appreciate you much.... Seymour Tabin-- thank you for coming by, and letting me know you enjoyed... Irish Rose-- thank you for your kind words.... Michael-- thank you my dear friend, always... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done. . .this beats with the heart of one who knows these waters. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
yes indeed, a path a lot of people have been down, good to see you, and thanks for the heart felt reply.... Lauren~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - a most beautiful writing, thoroughly enjoyed reading this... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Bill, thank you very much, I appreciate your kind words.... Lauren~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 09-30-2001).] |
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