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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-09-30 04:00 PM

Love Sweet Love

If I find myself
in a place
I don't belong
let not my heart
tarry for too long.
Let not my feelings
hasten to grow
if she desires
to move nice and slow.

Yet if she
shares a desire
to partake
let not my heart
tarry or hesitate.
For it yearns
to feel the energy
of love's flow
and I yearn
for love sweet love
to grow.

JamesLee
September30
2001

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-09-30 04:07 PM

Very nice and well done piece....

I hope you'd be able to know soon....

Thank you
***********************

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

2 posted 2001-09-30 04:10 PM

Yes ... each must wait for the other
Patience plays an important role

very nice

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-09-30 04:19 PM

Very nicely written James ... you've captured the anticipation beautifully - be it a long or slow wait, 'tis always worthwhile.

Best wishes,
/Kit

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-09-30 05:31 PM

nice

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-09-30 07:31 PM

James - this is a most powerful and stirring writing. Left me with many thoughts...

BC

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

6 posted 2001-09-30 07:35 PM

James,

Very beautiful poem.

Much enjoyed. Nice to meet you also.

Warm smiles, Marie

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-09-30 07:37 PM

Beautiful write James. Enjoyed!! ~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

8 posted 2001-09-30 10:28 PM

This is so sweet. Captures those first awkward moments of new love when you don't know whether to take it slowly or faster.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 529

9 posted 2001-09-30 10:45 PM

two things:
One: how true.
Two: when you find the right dance partner, the song just seems to slow down so neither of you misses a step. The result is worth the search, my friend.
-Napalm (who honestly isn't really confused as often as all that)

I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!
"Why do i smell something burning?!?"
I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM!

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

10 posted 2001-09-30 11:25 PM

Very nice writing James....your poem flowed like water!

Nathan

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

11 posted 2001-09-30 11:54 PM

If I find myself
in a place
I don't belong
let not my heart
tarry for too long
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You just don't know how many times I've tried to beat that into this stubborn head of mine. These are wise, wise words, my friend! Great write!

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