Open Poetry #16 |
Ever Remembered |
Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Ever remembered Places where the sun still shines Without my shadow Oh how I do miss them These wonderful dear people Without whom so many special moments Would never have occurred Lasting visions frozen in time's echo Countless tears shed in sorrow In laughter And in compassion Those streams that I have swum Father's hug so gentle Yet solid as rock Mother's caress supremely comforting Beyond most vivid imagination So many friends I have made And some that I have lost For now Still soon we will be together Billions of potential friends Yet so few ticks of the clock Siblings so very close Now so far away Past loves endlessly lingering In almost forgotten kiss Too many things left unsaid So much I would like to say Believing that the end Is my real beginning And days I have never known I'll never truly miss |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I have heard that we never miss what we have never known but I do not believe that. I have never known love yet I miss it. I have never known the kind of family who love you as you have yet, I miss it and would love to have such beautiful memories as you do, my friend. You are truly blessed. This is a wonderful poem, Sir Robert. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) I know these feelings ever so well, I feel we all have them every once ina while! (big hugggssssss) Remember that your siblings and your loved ones will always love you, sweet friend, just as me and many of your other friends do! (smiles) You are such a blessed and loving person, dearest Robert, and you have so much more happiness to look forward too! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
It almost saddens me.. all those wonderful wonderful people I'll never be able to know and comfort.. I guess I must make the best with the ones I do know.. people are such wonderful creatures, aren't they? Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sir Robert, Well this one pretty much locks it up for me! Yup, I'm a fan. I really super liked this poem. Very well done. It's a keeper for me. Thanks. |
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