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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-10 12:11 PM


As summer kisses autumn
Many trees do blush
Bringing color to leaves
Nature's decorations falling sweetly

Reminds me of you
First time lips touched
Your cheeks so rosy
Fell sweetly in love


© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-10 12:14 PM


sweet rememberences yuh

peaches73533
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2 posted 2001-11-10 12:22 PM


sweet sweet memories,thanks
Peaches

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3 posted 2001-11-10 01:20 AM


Blushing leaves and faces...cool imagery.
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4 posted 2001-11-10 06:31 PM


*sigh* ah, sweet knight, this is surly the way to fall in love. How tender and romantic your words are. I love it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-10 06:37 PM


(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful and whimsical, sweet friend, I love it! (big hugggssssss) May her sweet kiss forever fill your heart with happiness! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-11-12 12:20 PM


Sir Robert,
Loved the parallels in this poem. Fabulous.

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