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Domzi
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0 posted 2001-11-10 08:49 AM


Believe me when I say that I love you
This love has been so intense that it's messed my thoughts up
People try to put our love into the flames of hell
But I'M your beloved
So I'LL go into those flames and extinguish them with more than kindness...with all my heart

Do or die!

© Copyright 2001 Dominique N. C. - All Rights Reserved
rosepetals25
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1 posted 2001-11-10 09:16 AM


Domzi,

    
    Honest and sincere declaration of your love... I'm all for that


Hugs,
Tara

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2 posted 2001-11-10 05:36 PM




(sigh) Oh Dominique, this is soooooooo beautiful! I love it!!! This is destined to melt your loves heart forever! (sigh) You are a true romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Domzi, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-10 06:11 PM


aw

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

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4 posted 2001-11-10 08:06 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2001-11-10 11:04 PM


Hey girly,

Good to see you posting again! People will go to extremes to break others up! I know your golden heart won't let that happen with you and your true love! I'm definitely feelin' this!

Love,
RP

Domzi
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6 posted 2001-11-11 01:59 AM


I'm so glad you all enjoyed this one : ).
It truly was written from the heart.

Do or die!

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