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vandana
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0 posted 2001-11-10 05:11 PM



Each day,
Each night,
I prayed for us,
Now,
I know,
Time Is near,
for you to know,
That I love you,
Listen to me,
Thousands words I say,
I promise every word I say,
Listen to me,
Now just hold my hand,
sit beside me,
Listen these words I say,
And It's true
what I say,
It Is begining
now love has begun,
listen to me,
I love you,
all the way,
I will sing these words to you,
hope you believe,
you better listen these words,
these words I say
Is forever,
just listen to me,
Listen to me

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2001-11-10 05:13 PM


Listen to me too....enjoy the way you
expressed so much feelings and love
within this poem...

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-10 05:17 PM




(big hugggssssss) Soooooo beautiful! (sigh) May sweet love forever listen to your sweet heart, and fill your life with joy! (big hugggsssssss) You are a true romantic, sweet Vandana! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-11-10 05:31 PM


This is very, very lovely, Vandana, one of your best and I mean that.

Kathleen
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also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Sven
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4 posted 2001-11-10 08:47 PM


wonderful my friend. . .

I know that you will be heard. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tracey
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5 posted 2001-11-10 10:16 PM


Lovely Vandana. Must be a wonderful person who's going to hear those words from his poetess. I'm sure he'll listen very intently.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-11-10 10:17 PM


It's a chance you have to take or you will forever wonder what if . . . lovely write, vandana.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2001-11-10 11:33 PM


Beautiful, Vandana! Very lovely!
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