Open Poetry #16 |
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Listen To Me |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Each day, Each night, I prayed for us, Now, I know, Time Is near, for you to know, That I love you, Listen to me, Thousands words I say, I promise every word I say, Listen to me, Now just hold my hand, sit beside me, Listen these words I say, And It's true what I say, It Is begining now love has begun, listen to me, I love you, all the way, I will sing these words to you, hope you believe, you better listen these words, these words I say Is forever, just listen to me, Listen to me |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Listen to me too....enjoy the way you expressed so much feelings and love within this poem... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssss) Soooooo beautiful! (sigh) May sweet love forever listen to your sweet heart, and fill your life with joy! (big hugggsssssss) You are a true romantic, sweet Vandana! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very, very lovely, Vandana, one of your best and I mean that. Kathleen |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . I know that you will be heard. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely Vandana. Must be a wonderful person who's going to hear those words from his poetess. I'm sure he'll listen very intently. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It's a chance you have to take or you will forever wonder what if . . . lovely write, vandana. ![]() All writing comes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Vandana! Very lovely! |
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