Heart of Crystal - repost - oldie, but goodie?

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-09 05:19 PM

Heart of Crystal

such is it as she has
transparency, most brilliant form
likened to diamonds’ norm
with exception, see the
simplest rejection
of heart break, so forlorn

as
in her
inner chi
shines this
shimmer
of light
sigh

there is not a crystal ball
that holds the inner truths so well
something once seen, heard like a bell
something of life she would tell
could she break past the crystal wall
could you but hear the call

as
in her
inner chi
shines this
shimmer
of light
sigh

were you to study crystallography
or even her given autography
and dispel any and all mystery
would you therein find serenity
or just her lovesome memory
in her heart of crystal beauty

as
in her
inner chi
shines this
shimmer
of light
sigh

and grown from pure crystallite
her charms for you would crystallize
a vision of beauty before your eyes
and you would wear her light
and catch the rainbow of her bright
and then you would hear her sigh

but
in her
inner chi
shines this
shimmer
of light
sigh

circa 11/2000
repost 11/2001

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-11-09 05:31 PM

(big hugggssssss) Tears can say so much always; they all speak out and sing from a crystal heart! (smiles) Such sweet serenity and beauty fills these words, sweet Karilea, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is a timeless classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-09 05:34 PM

You did a wonderful job on this.I can relate totally to this one.You are a beautiful writer.
Peaches

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-11-09 05:56 PM

BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL, SUNSHINE!!!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-11-09 09:07 PM

were you to study crystallography
or even her given autography
and dispel any and all mystery
would you therein find serenity
or just her lovesome memory
in her heart of crystal beauty

as
in her
inner chi
shines this
shimmer
of light
sigh

and grown from pure crystallite
her charms for you would crystallize
a vision of beauty before your eyes
and you would wear her light
and catch the rainbow of her bright
and then you would hear her sigh
=======================================

you have to ask? ....
you will already know the clever rhyme scheme of this makes me giddy

and the imagery is delightful
very very cool poem Sun!!

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-11-09 09:36 PM

Outstanding...
I am overwhelmed with many emotion at this poem you re-post 2day and I thank you for taking the precious time to do this for us...
SunshineFriend, the presentation is elegant and as for the poem well it's a keepsake for me Sweetie cuz I could read this over and over and over again...
It's one of those 'special' poem's...
*~coco~*

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-11-09 10:31 PM

A definite "goody". In every way
Sanra

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