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The Woman in Me....
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The Woman in Me.... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
The Woman in Me…. Deep within a shell of fair skin, emerald eyes, and pecan hair hides a woman of sensuality her sighs of passion long ago hushed by the hand of propriety, her fingers, delicately skilled in the art of caress, are bound and gloved her eyes, swift in their dash to your heart, have been blindfolded in darkness, her legs, shapely with the promise of a wonderful dance, now crippled and lame her heart, thought to be the seed of her passion, sliced and bled dry and so is left…the soul of the woman in me….. achildsheart 11-09-01 this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 11-09-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your poetry reveals a spritely dancing soul, full of passion, and love for everyone.  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooooo beautifully sensual and lovely! (sigh) You describe the beauty of a woman so perfectly in your lovely passionate words! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I always find it difficult to comment on the style of a poem when the substance is so unsettling. Truth is...as always, I enjoyed the way this was written. It communicates quite well the feeling of self loss by anothers control. If this is a personal experience for you, I hope you will soon find a way to change the reality of your soul. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 Well written, honest....open......expressive writing of what was, is........and what indeed can be again....... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
There's more to this than meets the eye and what meets the eye is very good Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
THIS is superb! Enjoyed! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
says much and spoke to this girl Kathleen |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Oh my...and who among our female numbers would not in some way either relate, or know one who relates, to this... well done... |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Exceptional writing.You have a gift for words.I'm sure alot of women can relate to this in one or another. Peaches |
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