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0 posted 2001-11-09 10:10 AM




The awaiting of The Great Jean`te

years passed, Kelara held in mind
the vision, what was to be
the coming of her soulmate
the return of The Great Jean`te

It has been said in mystical rhyme
He comes in menacing black form
Raging in anger, virulent manner
That of foreboding destructive storm

In other lifetimes he searched for his mate
She who would be his undoing at long last
One of great courage, seeing past façade
Unafraid and resolute, steadfast

Kelara with knowledge now
why when stories were told
Of the woman, courageous
Standing proud, willfully bold

It was then, blood would sing
With remembering familiar to mind
Yet in heart, her feelings waited
For vision’s trek, most surely to find


~SEA~

part 1 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002581.html

part 2 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002667.html

part 3 : /pip/Forum51/HTML/002865.html

part 4: /pip/Forum51/HTML/002998.html



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1 posted 2001-11-09 10:32 AM



You are penning a saga, and something that will ultimately be a keeper....

enjoying here....

more soon, please!

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2 posted 2001-11-09 10:35 AM


I could not have done this without your patience and guidance...thank you so much  
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3 posted 2001-11-09 11:05 AM


It already is a keeper!  Look at you grow Sea!  
This is remarkable...
very beautiful and captivating!  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2001-11-09 12:09 PM


And then, and then?

I can hardly wait.  Write faster

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2001-11-09 02:53 PM


Susan,

You make me want to sit down for awhile a pen my own story.  This is lovely work, some of your best.  I'm quite proud of you. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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6 posted 2001-11-11 11:17 AM


In other lifetimes he searched for his mate
She who would be his undoing at long last
One of great courage, seeing past façade
Unafraid and resolute, steadfast
====================================

how did I miss this?
*sigh* ...its impossible to keep up in here now...not sure I even want to try....
another gem for this lovely crown your muse is bestowing.
well done poetess Sea.

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

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