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sunshinemist
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Fl. sunshines early mist

0 posted 2001-11-10 11:35 AM


Snowflakes (Cinquain)

Snowflakes
gently falling
forming different shapes
carried by the silent breezes
caress.

~sunshinemist~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

© Copyright 2001 Marie. C. - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2001-11-10 12:06 PM


Yes... they certainly do caress...dont they?
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2 posted 2001-11-10 12:23 PM




(smiles) Oh Marie, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) I love sticking my tongue out as it snows and feel the soft tickle of a snowflake landing on it! (kiss on cheek) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

sunshinemist
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3 posted 2001-11-10 12:33 PM


Eagle Scorpion- thank you for reading. Yes they sure do caress you as they fall. Nice to meet you!  


___________

Noah- thank you kindly for reading and your lovely comments. I love the snowflakes although have not seen them in years and years. Still remember and the smell of fresh snow.  

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

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4 posted 2001-11-11 02:15 AM


no two snowflakes are alike..may your cinquains be as varied as those gifts from Mother Earth...
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5 posted 2001-11-11 10:22 AM


indeed lovely write here, i enjoyed closing my eyes and watching them fall....


Greeneyes~


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sunshinemist
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6 posted 2001-11-11 11:15 AM


Faterider- thank you for reading! Yes, you are correct, no two are alike.  Glad that you liked it.

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

sunshinemist
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7 posted 2001-11-11 11:16 AM


Green Eyes- thank you for reading and glad that you could close your eyes and dream with me.  

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

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