Open Poetry #16 |
He Passes The Torch |
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Lest We Forget He Passes The Torch His face was lit the day he went Knowing freedom he would defend Not thinking of the blood that's spent The torch held by him and a friend They put the gun into his hands Training him only how to kill Sending to fight in foreign lands No time to think that blood he'd spill All around is pain to be heard As fear and death assault his ears Frozen faces with silent word Dying so many young in years His face still lit, his time is spent Freedom is bought, his life did spend Knowing it all the day he went He passes the torch to his friend Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Powerful thoughts here Karen. Such sadness that there is even a need to pass a torch like this on. If only there were no need for fighting in this world....if only. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, Karen. Great work here. Too many times this is the harsh reality of war that many of us don't realize is closer than we think. Very intriguing write. All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...you have so well expressed some of the feelings of the brave young men who over time have gone to battle for freedom and democracy....The young women too...as well as the civilians behind the lines who helped us get the job done.... We must remember all of these heroes and what they have endured...through all of the wars back through the centuries... Sadly, so many of our older vets are dying each day....and many of them feel that they have now been forgotten.... If you know one....and they live near...just call and simply say thank you....that you have not forgotten.... I called my father and told him thank you for what he did for our country....You should have seen the spark in his eyes, as well as a tear...knowing that someone understood and cared.... Thanks much for posting this rememberence poem...You have said it well. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Tbrins tears to my eyes. I hate this part of our world, the need to fight and kill eachother. And so sad for those that have to go through it personally. God bless all of them. Sandra |
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