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Drifting
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Drifting |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Drifting Echoes hover my lusting time With a cover of dust and grime And dark gray lines the inner clouds Of priceless fray I once was proud. A Fer-de-lance, strikes poison chance I dance the edge in aging stance Leaving me in lenient bleed a Blood letting, ancients curing deed Hopelessness is a tired horse Morose along a musty course Fireflies and tears of passion Dimmed to low and turned to ashen. Vast has cast my rage of fission Into an old and dusty vision The saddle turns my rump to shreds Daffodils turn to lily beds. It seems I missed my valleys green. And seek in tea the elder’s mien. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Ya know Stinky...if this wasnt such a cool poem... Id have to fuss at you about all the anologies of being old   Me thinks its time for a new saddle for Randy and a flight to Shangri-La to chase away these blues ... I hear they are serving raspberry tea on the flight *L* *winkiewinkie*   |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
 Ah Sir, if not you, who? Well done, my friend... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I know just how you feel, but may the trumpets in your heart sing on and be kissed by the herbal teas of true love! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet Seymour, you always have such a loving heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh, you've captured nature at it's finest in this one, yes, I enjoyed this. Kathleen |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful Sy. I love it. Guys like you don't get old, they age like a fine wine  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you one and all for the read and comments. *L* |
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