Open Poetry #16 |
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Dream of love |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia ![]() |
I feel your touch, it warms me I feel your breath and winds that carry love to me speak I touch you and a silent bond encompasses You are my dream, my fulfilment, my love |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo tender and romantic! (sigh) Her heart must have melted when you spoke this to her, this is soooooo beautiful! (big hugggssssss) You are a true romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romantically beautiful are your words. You weave such tenderness in your words that I drift away on them. This is a keeper and the lady who inspired them is very lucky to have you. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I feel your touch, it warms me I feel your breath and winds that carry love to me speak I touch you and a silent bond encompasses You are my dream, my fulfilment, my love Each vision, drawing nearer To the moment of our Love's embrace, chasing The webs of nightwings We touch and float within the flight of fancy Forever in time, in rhyme, from above Forgive me....I was enamoured by the verse and had to float along. Simply beautiful...your words.. Sincerely, Regina |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, brevity suits you... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Bump......~Too beautiful to be in the back~ It's all in the mind |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thank you everyone for your lovely replies, they are wonderful, and to you Regina for bumping it to the front page again. Nice adding of verse, thanks. Each vision, drawing nearer To the moment of our Love's embrace, chasing The webs of nightwings We touch and float within the flight of fancy Forever in time, in rhyme, from above Embarking on the journey of love The moonlight rays all tempt above Embracing hearts to be as one On passion fly, till journey done Hope you all stay well and versed. Sincerely Rick |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rick- Such lovely thoughts you've penned here. Nicely done. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh nice! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh, such beautiful sentiments Rick ... and the additional lines in your response compliment the first verse wonderfully. Much enjoyed! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very beautiful Sandra |
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