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To the Lady in yon castle keep . . . I await
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To the Lady in yon castle keep . . . I await |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sweet lady of yon castle keep know thou as long as I live or sit this charger, thee shall never be alone. Take thee this heart keeping it close to thine. I pledge thee my sword, my honor, my love. Whilst thee cannot see me know I exist in thy life. I shall ride to thee when thy heart is prepared. I shall rescue thee when cold, gray stone no longer describes thee. Until then I await thy re-transformation to beautiful, vibrant woman. ~*~ Inspired by: The Keep Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
You're having a lot of fun with this aren't you  I like this. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Promises, promises ...hahaha Excellent piece!! Now I see why the ladies praise you! The days of old when the ways were bold chivalry was more than a thought Days are now cold our Knights have been stoled but their undying love well sought |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful response to Cat's poem....enjoyed! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Cute very cute.  I liked how you did this.Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
*sigh* that's our Texan for ya.... making the ladies swoon |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely response to Sandra's write! She'll like this. You must spend most of your life upon a brave steed m'lord! Whilst the fair damsels watch from the parapet for your arrival. Warning! Beware of strange creatures within the moat! ~Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
oh your the dude, you get around, is this a contest or can anyone play??? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Knights with shining amour can play( note to Robert A). This is quite good, 'loper. Seems as if you are stimulated daily by the fair maidens of Pipsland. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Whilst thee cannot see me know I exist in thy life. I shall ride to thee when thy heart is prepared. I shall rescue thee when cold, gray stone no longer describes thee A captivating read Poetfriend... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ First Class ... all the way~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Enjoyable... liked the style and the feel. I bow to you and yours. Peace. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I think it's time for some folk to understand that just because I use the word "I" in my work, that does not necessarily mean I am talking about me. The trick is for you to be able to discern the difference. And if you can't, Ok with me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh thanks for letting me know this was here. What a lovely thought to keep, while in the cold castle. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing with heart...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
What noble patience and devotion! Wonderful Interloper! Now...climb that wall! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
This is great... very very good |
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