Open Poetry #16 |
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The First Time |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC ![]() |
The First Time AMK 11/8/01 The first time I see you I'll know the true meaning of love Raising my eyes to our Lord I'll give soft thanks to above The first time I touch your face I'll have real peace in my soul No longer held by chains My soul at long last complete and whole The first time I kiss your mouth Feeling the warmth of your hand I'll tremble at the beauty of you Captivated by your command The first time we make love I'll feel the Earth move and shake In the still of the night We will make sweet love, when in morning we will awake The first time I lay beside you I'll feel your heart beat close to mine The hope in my heart will be strengthened I'll love you for all time The first time I love you Will start the rest of our days Our souls joined finally Thus the beginning of our...always "I could kiss you in |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ah, yes, that will be the beginning of forever. Absolutely wonderful. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Amy, you are such a romantic, your words always have my heart swooning! (sigh) It's just the beginning of a sweet happiness you'll forever feel! (smiles) Maybe someday someone will love me like that! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Absolutely lovely and tender write, Amy. Very well expressed. ![]() All writing comes |
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