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SEA
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0 posted 2001-11-08 11:54 AM



I've always been a redneck girl
who's heart was made for one
but I see nothing wrong
with having a bit of fun

I've always been a goof ball
more a buddy and friend
always there with laughter
and smile I can lend

I see nothing wrong with poetry
meant to offer jolly and glee
won't you stop being so stuffy
and just play along with me?

Nothing should be taken
quite so solemnly
instead you should laugh
and feel all giggily

What does it really hurt?
does it make you somehow less?
what does it cost you,
to share some happiness?


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-08 11:56 AM


(smiling) Hmmm... I think you just called me stuffy..... ( laughing)


very cute piece SEA!

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2 posted 2001-11-08 11:59 AM


who??? me???? no way!  
I happen to think you are wonderful  

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3 posted 2001-11-08 12:11 PM



Miss Priss here...I'll sit on the sidelines and watch you all play....However! If any one of you get unruly....I've got my handy-dandy finger-whapping ruler standing by....LOL

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-08-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-11-08 12:13 PM


what? Miss Priss?? huh?
hey now, I've been a good girl, and will remain such  

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5 posted 2001-11-08 12:16 PM


SEAsweetie, ya know I enjoyed reading this poem you post today...
MUAHHHHH on cheekz from moi2toi cuz you're da best...
*~coco~*

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6 posted 2001-11-08 12:17 PM


Only subterrainian organ grinders with half their faces masked would not understand. Tom and Tomassina cool cats just wanna have fun.
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7 posted 2001-11-08 12:39 PM


Susan..RIGHT ON!! We can laugh and have fun...and Karilea, we will be oh so careful!    Thanks Susan..we all need to lighten up sometimes!
*Nancy exists, turning cartwheels all the way to the kitchen for lunch*

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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8 posted 2001-11-08 12:54 PM


YES ma'am!!

and i'm having a blast!!!!!

hehe  

loved it!

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9 posted 2001-11-08 02:24 PM


All it costs is a smile.  I think I can spare a few.           Love it, sweetie. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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10 posted 2001-11-08 02:31 PM


I agree wholeheartedly, I just can't seem to fit into to the "play" but maybe someday!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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11 posted 2001-11-08 03:00 PM


I'm being unruly and I don't care who smacks me...as long as someone does!  Was this the best day ever to blow off work?  Seriously...it's good to be goofy sometimes.  (Other times, it's better to be mickey).

I agree, Ron...I think she called you stuffy.
It's also fun to be the designated instigator!

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12 posted 2001-11-08 03:02 PM


Girls, (and guys) just wanna have fun!
Enjoyed the laughter Sea.   *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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13 posted 2001-11-08 03:29 PM



SEA, I would love to play along with you but my strict upbringing and strong religious views do not permit me to articulate any manner of response which could be termed flirtaceous in any way..



H A H !!!!


SEA! SEA!
Play with me!
Be as frisky
As can be!
Kill me with
Frivolity..
Put a quiver
In my knee...
Make me sigh
In ecstacy...
Giggling
Uproariously..
Soaked in your
Frivolity...
Make me want you
Endlessly..
Here I am
On bended knee
Pleading for
The life of me
SEA! SEA!
Play with me!
Let the game begin  



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14 posted 2001-11-08 03:34 PM



You wanna play with a stuffy like me???
Let's do the merry-go-round sweet Sea
I'll be the horse and what will you be???
Oh my this is funn you're so right you see

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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15 posted 2001-11-08 03:54 PM


So in this case it must be true that girls just want to have fun..but seriously..smile and laugh...have fun....James
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16 posted 2001-11-08 03:56 PM


Here I am on bended knee
Deer please, I ask help of thee
Look at her beauty, look at her grace
look at the smile she wears on her face
NO I'm not jealous of Dear Sea
but I thought you also liked me!!
I'm not giving up, nor will I retreat
nor will I admit, nor face defeat.
I'll just had to join in on this rhyme
but I still hope you'll like me in due time!!  

I had to join in the fun Sea, I adored this.
                 

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-08-2001).]

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17 posted 2001-11-08 03:59 PM


I remember a song by Johnny Cash....A Boy
Named Sue...No....that is not you...
Come on down and lets boogie...Huh?  I
don't even know how....This was cute.

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18 posted 2001-11-08 05:13 PM


You mean I can no longer be serious?  
You mean I haff to laff?
OKAY!
I surrender!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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19 posted 2001-11-08 06:07 PM


My goodness Lois…what’s Superman
going to do?…There taking down almost
all the phone booths because everyone’s
got cell phones now!…The last time there
was an emergency he was spotted flying
out of a changing room in WAL*MART!
…but seriously don’t laugh because I think
he shops there too!


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20 posted 2001-11-08 06:14 PM


See what SEA has done? She (SEA) has gotten Balladeer on bended knee... Well, maybe we shall see what SEA shall see.
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21 posted 2001-11-08 06:53 PM


too all the ladies
my girls who jest
you know you all
are truly the best!


to all the men
whom I adore
all leave me breathless
always wanting more


but Balladeer on bended knee
oh this please God, let me see
let him beg for a kiss
so I can give him smoochy bliss


Superman, my Superman
I don't care where you shop
as long as you kiss me
and never STOP!!
    

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22 posted 2001-11-08 07:01 PM



Ah, gentle spirit....


Believe me, I would have to be mental
Not to love a spirit so gentle
As you always seem to be to me.
I'll shout loud so the world will hear it
How I love my gentle spirit..
So sweet she makes the spirit rise in me  

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23 posted 2001-11-08 07:05 PM


Hey! On my poem you flirt with ME darn it! ROFL come here Balladeer  
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24 posted 2001-11-08 07:40 PM


AWWW.......Shucks......This is exactly what I needed on such a sad day in my life, and I thank you and Luv you both. Hugs and stuff.......Donna  


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-08-2001).]

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25 posted 2001-11-08 08:50 PM


Oh, gee, I'm sorry, SEA my girl...
I wish that I were dead!
(Hey, gentle spirit, don't you fret.
I'll see you on YOUR thread!)  

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