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An Unwritten Spell
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An Unwritten Spell |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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AN UNWRITTEN SPELL My hand draws to you so slowly at first then with thriving thirst reaching and touching you. But you turn away missing the gesture nothing is for sure its why I hide away In words I will try to so fill your soul that is not my role but is what I must try Reaching, touching you my story to tell an unwritten spell as my hand draws to you With paper and pen I weave my magic a love drawn tragic from my undying pen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A very sad, haunting write...thank you.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yes.....it's what I do too....lonely, but true.  Enjoyed. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such sadness that brings tears to my eyes. I hope that the love you pen is returned in all the ways that you want it to. Love is rare, my friend. Hold on tight to it when you find it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, powerful write here. I hope it gets better for you. All writing comes |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
So sad but yet so powerful. A beautiful write that contains so much truth. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I feel this like I just wrote it. Excellent writing, you said it all. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sunshine Lone Wolf - Thank you for your comments. Voiceless Many of us have or will soon enough experience this, Love's truth is in the "spelling". Serenity - You have a beautiful heart, I'm sorry to hear of its lonesomeness. I was told that to break the spell all that was needed was to read it backwards ... it hasn't worked yet!! I wish you well!! Karen - Do not worry, when its ready, I will be too !! Sandra - I have read your poems and felt your heart experienced your hurt from miles apart ... Yes, it could have been by your hand .... with that in mind I am sending you this ... <<<<<<<< HUG >>>>>>>> |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ctowen, I haven't read many of your poems as of yet... but the ones I have read I really like. I enjoyed this.. it was ( as Sunshine said) haunting. I really really like.Hugs, Tara |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you Tara, it has a haunting effect. I think because I tried to word it as if it was actually a spell, hence the the repeated words and internal rhymes. It chills the truth of the words a bit. I am glad you like it. |
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