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rwood
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0 posted 2001-11-08 08:25 PM



Her mission was never impossible
The drawl was easy
The agenda was mapped
The divining rod now pointed
In the direction
Of a new breed of wealth

An American
Pictured as a commoner
With Richard Gere eyes
and a Tommy Lee Jones’ attitude

He’d gotten lucky
In an inheritance
And spawned an extravagant Cruise
that floated the Caribbean
In High Casino Style

AtlantiSea...the Holy Rollers Haven
Anything less than diamonds
Wasn’t invited

Seems Edwardo had taken
A liking to his wild horse form
Several photos showcased
The Snuggling Up
To the Buck of New Wave

She’d have both on a plate

As she dressed for dinner
She chose carefully
A gown of dripping lavender
Sequined with seed pearls
Placed ever so expertly
In perfect swirls of curve

Splashing Poison to scent
And heeling in strapless
Four inch teeters
She delicately lined her eyes
Pinning her hair.. upwards
Allowing a hint of curl to drape
Down the delicate skin
Of the back of her nape

Polishing her skin opalescent
With a strand of Tiffany pearls
Edwardo was tasteful
In his choice of gift
She became Nauseated at the feel

Comforted by the recorder
Wired into her feminine uplift
She slipped on lace gloves
Fingerless...specially made
Just for her
Finishing
With a pearl ring
Encrusted with diamonds
That must have killed
The oyster in birth

Traipsing slowly
Down the marblesque staircase
Swooning Edwardo
With each step..perfectly placed

Escorting her to their evening
On the Tavern of the Blue Green Sea

Edwardo was exhilarated
To have her at his side
The more she slid away from him
The more he found her prized
He’d enslave her with his mind
But his Dark Lord
would be so disappointed
If he allowed her to taste Hades
Before he first brought her
To Whimper on her knees


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1 posted 2001-11-08 08:29 PM




(big hugggssssss) Mmmmmmm...Richard Gere eyes and a Tommy Lee Jones attitude! (smiles) Such a wonderfully written and seductive turn of this wonderful series! (smiles) A wonderful appetizer of thrills, we'll have to see what the main course brings! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-11-08 08:35 PM


Rwood,
A mind of intrigue, with the wings of a butterfly. *L*

Midnitesun
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3 posted 2001-11-08 08:36 PM


There were so many great lines in here I couldn't line them all up...suffice it to say, you are a first rate storyteller, and draw such vivid images, I can see the pearls and that "dripping" gown. And the whimpering...I think I heard myself whimper with delight reading this tale.
Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-08 08:38 PM


WOW!!WOW!!!!I am so glad I was able to get caught up. Oh gosh what a talent you have. These are amazing. I love them.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WRBreezin
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Posts 212

5 posted 2001-11-09 05:16 AM



  You continue with a wealth of imagery, and detail...our "spy" is clearly seen.


Willie B

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6 posted 2001-11-09 10:26 AM



quote:

An American
Pictured as a commoner
With Richard Gere eyes
and a Tommy Lee Jones’ attitude


Yikes! What a picture!


Larry C
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7 posted 2001-11-10 02:01 AM


Regina,
And then...!?  ...........................
okay, I'm ready and then... ah come on Regina...

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 11-10-2001).]

Tracey
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8 posted 2001-11-10 11:23 PM


Great, I see part seven is already posted. I'm skipping over there now

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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