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I Spy 2 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Reporting for work was easy Flinging open Inspector Warren’s Door Tossing the tape on his desk Disgust filled her eyes At the sight of him “Aahh...my little bird has returned! You must sing to me of your events. How much did you have to give in To our Latino of Lusting Dust!” He crowed at her entry “If you had not known my father, and did not know my real name, I’d swear you were evil, and spare the world the shame of your birth!” She replied in vain. “But then who would look after you? Come...sit...tell me of your journey. Was he..Quite the Lady’s Man?” He implored. “Your sick emotional voyeurism Won’t get you anywhere. Let’s just say your Lady’s Man May have YOU all hot and bothered But he did nothing for me.” She shot hoping he’d magically falter Fingering the tape He kissed it “I know where you hid this” He hissed. She flew into him Swift heeled and square Centering his chest Sending him backwards in the kick Landing in a thunderous thud Of laughter. “Oh! he muttered through the cackle. The T’ai Chi has you agile my sweet I must make sure you are always fast on your feet!” Pulling her 9mm From it’s hiding place Pressing to temple “One of these days... I’ll prove your Mother Made a mistake” Slamming the door Breaking glass Leaving her call of duty She heard his voice down the hall His raunchy echo brewed “Perfect place for a lovely Little tattoo bruise!” She stopped momentarily Her blood sending heat to her hands Searing her temper hot She spoke to herself... Remember the scars Remember how he saved you She touched the back of her hand Now laced with a demon Repulsed by the coincidence Recalling his arrival Of split second timing She fevered the thought Of how some things make you miserably Indebted |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, YOU EXPRESS THIS IN SUCH POWERFUL EMOTIONS!!! I could feel both the scars and the savior in this wonderful poem! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful evening! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Cool write Regina. I like this continuation. Love those last lines Of how some things make you miserably Indebted What will she do now???? I'm on tenterhooks!! If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Regina, All can say is WOW! This is incredible writing, just amazing. *hugs*  Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
rwood, Is it me? Or do you just love to keep me waiting?  |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Regina, a wonderfully powerful write, filled with emotion of hate and dark filled rememberence. The work of owed duty. Keep the imaginary juices flowing, and keep us all on the edges of our seats. Great work. Sincerely Rick |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Nothing short of thunderous...the action is swift, yet detailed and informative. You've got the "novel" touch, Regina. Willie B |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Regina~ Wow! What a scene! You bring your characters to life. I loved it Hugs, ~KRista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I hung on every word!!!!!!!!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Noah: Thanks for the cheer!!!Poet dear! Tracey: It's whirling around and hoping to conveys..You are wonderful. Michael: Hug to you...Thank you for enjoying!! Larry: That's a Lady's Job...she isn't a lady...she completely female. LOL! Rick: I'll try to do so...Especially if it makes you stop by! Hugs! Willie: I wish..thank you for helping me dream!Maybe with lightyears of the encouragement you graciously give! Krista: So glad you enjoyed...I release through them I believe...but promise not to go bolistic. Thank you!LoS: Yeah...hang in there...I will try to make it worth your while. Thanx millions! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
full on with this one Regina. . . great job. . . the characters are very life-like. . . makes me think that they're just around the corner. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Umm..  WOW! I just can't find anything more to say. Geesh.. EXCELLENT! Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Sven: She'll watch your back!! Temptress: Thanx for the "Wow"!! Much appreciated! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Great ending line in this piece...well done, indeed! |
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