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Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

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0 posted 2001-11-08 01:24 AM

If I kissed you
would you try not to laugh
there’s a time and place
for everything
would you put down your book
just for a moment
give me a chance
to catch your notice

If I kissed you
softly
would you
kiss me back

somewhere in this night?

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

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1 posted 2001-11-08 01:28 AM

Oh Duncan, this is so innocently expressed I just loved every word of it...
*~coco~*

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

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where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-11-08 01:47 AM

The beauty of your thoughts and words never cease to amaze me Duncan. A lady would be a fool not to put her book down for a kiss like this. Yes, I'm quite sure that she would stop laughing, stop reading...for this kiss...in this night.
You caught her notice long ago
She stopped her laughter don't you know
A bookworm though I know she is
She'd lay her book down for your kiss
And kiss you back with lips so soft
A blissfull moment, timeless thought
And somewhere in this long dark night
This kiss just makes the world seem bright

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 11-08-2001).]

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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OK, USA

3 posted 2001-11-08 01:47 AM

Duncan this is short and sweetly stated.Great job.
Peaches

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-11-08 03:00 AM

Duncan~
This is so nice~
But ... I'd have to 'fess up ...
I just love a kiss that *giggles*~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-11-08 07:23 AM

This is very romantic. And being part of The Kiss Lovers Club of Passions

You know I love this one.

A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03

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on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-11-08 07:27 AM

a kiss for no reason at all while reading a book, oh yeah.....

this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

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7 posted 2001-11-08 08:10 AM

again Very nicely done... concise and tender, with an innocence of desire that touches the reader...

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-11-08 08:47 AM

Is it a poetry book?

thats a tough choice *L*
just kidding

Im thinking long lines will be forming ...
a sincere kiss is hard to resist

very cool poetic plea written in your signature style.
well done poet Duncan
jm

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-11-08 08:49 AM

Oh, WELL DONE!....

Interloper

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Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-11-08 10:03 AM

I gotta feeling she would kiss your back

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-08-2001).]

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03

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11 posted 2001-11-08 10:20 AM

very soft and tender words here...

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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Fl

12 posted 2001-11-08 10:36 AM

Aww, this made me sigh...

But cute nonetheless. I liked how softly this came across.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

13 posted 2001-11-08 10:48 AM

standing in line....

no book at the moment

and no giggles...

Abigaile
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since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

14 posted 2001-11-08 11:18 AM

Very sweet. It's the little things like this that make our days so bright. *giggle*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2001-11-08 11:39 AM

What was the name of the book?
Just kidding!
Can I be next?
BIG SMOOOOOCH!
and a tender hug, ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07

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Netherlands

16 posted 2001-11-08 06:16 PM

Always late when there's some fun going on.

Kissing Uhhhh???

Later at night or at morning dew
I'll send you kisses more then a few
And leave a candle with burning flame
So you can see from where those kisses came

Love your poem

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/

Midnitesun

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Gaia

17 posted 2001-11-08 06:20 PM

OK, teaser....
I put my book down hours ago!

Tiersdin
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east coast

18 posted 2001-11-08 06:23 PM

This night
your lips tell
stories unending...

loved this!

~Tier

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2001-11-08 06:28 PM

NOPE...I won't pucker up....but I do believe
you have shown the true feelings of one
wishing for just a kiss...nicely done.

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

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Virginia

20 posted 2001-11-08 06:48 PM

laugh???

when being offered a beautiful kiss??

unthinkable!!

(giggle maybe... *grin)

i enjoyed this, duncan! you have a way with words!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

21 posted 2001-11-08 08:07 PM

you do know that some places you are kissed tend to make one giggle..just a little...

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

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22 posted 2001-11-09 11:26 AM

I replied to this before under a pen name but I thought it was so lovely I wanted to bump it to the top again!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Larry C

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United States

23 posted 2001-11-11 02:37 AM

Duncan,
Nothing personal fella, but I'm going to pass on that offer your makin'.

rwood
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Tennessee

24 posted 2001-11-11 03:47 PM

Ahhh...only a fool would not put down everything and take advantage of such a kiss. A very nice sentiment of longing. Enjoyed.

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

25 posted 2001-11-11 05:08 PM

*sigh* I know that I have just come in at the end but do you think you might have a kiss left over for me? I would melt from just such a kiss as you would give.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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26 posted 2001-11-11 05:16 PM

this is probably one of my favorites by you...because I giggle all the time

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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United States

27 posted 2001-11-12 12:41 PM

Duncan,
I'm not sure, but I think Regina called me a fool! Please verify.

Duncan
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28 posted 2001-11-12 02:26 AM

Larry---I don't respond to my own poetry, however for you, big boy, I'm making an exception. Regina's right...you don't know what you're missing. Now shut up and get in line. How's that for a challenge?
(Please someone close this thread...before Larry kisses me).

Larry C

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United States

29 posted 2001-11-13 10:05 AM

Duncan,
Well okay fish lips, you better just pucker up. 'Cause my man hood ain't in doubt. But reputation may be!

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

30 posted 2001-11-14 06:47 AM

LOL!!! Your kiss is stirring up emotions Duncan. I just peeped in because of the tremendous responses. So glad everyone sees this as a keeper! Larry...leave Duncan alone...I meant that between us (Ladies)..we'd be foolish not to take advantage of such a kiss. Now put your lips back on before I tell MOM!

Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Sonya
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since 2001-11-13

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Mesa, Arizona

31 posted 2001-11-14 10:50 AM

I ask myself that same question. Your poem is wonderful!
Sonya

Larry C

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32 posted 2001-11-14 01:37 PM

Regina,
That was a close one! Thanks sis!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

33 posted 2001-11-14 06:48 PM

GOOD GRIEF DUNCAN!!!
I PUT THE BOOK DOWN LAST THURSDAY!!
SOON IT WILL BE CHRISTMAS!!
I WANT MY KISS!!...
*time to pay up*

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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34 posted 2001-11-15 01:59 PM

she would certainly be a fool
a kiss from you would make her drool
to have a kiss from a man like you
would surely be a dream come true!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Digitalfaith21
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since 2001-11-16

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Aurora, IL

35 posted 2001-11-16 03:28 PM

you have made such a great remark on how to catch someones attention...I think anyone would love to be kissed for no reason from someone special...wonderful job....

Jennifer

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