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Kiss me gently, until you love me
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Kiss me gently, until you love me |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Kiss me gently until you love me Hold me forever if need be I only ask for you to remember how one day you loved me I now realize your worth So let's both for at least a moment capture our love this morning Let the sunshine fill our hearts With our passion travel in time to that space where our love once shined [This message has been edited by walker (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lots of love and passion...Certainly your message will be heard....Nice write. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Lovely!! i'd like to give you a big *smooch* for this but i don't think that's exactly what you're looking for... hehe! anyway.... beautiful writing..... walk on.... i wish you all the kisses you desire, heart on fire, quenched |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Let the sunshine fill our hearts With our passion travel in time to that space where our love once shined Hey, get me a ticket while you're at the window. Liked this alot, walker. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so romantic. I would love to be kissed gently......Absolutely a beautiful read. I am sure he will fill your life with passion once he tastes your kisses.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderfully expressed, walker. All writing comes |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautifully put Walker !!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kisses have a way of opening doors of opportunity...James |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
can i use this sometime?! good write |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
walker, Very much enjoyed Hugs, Tara |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How romantic and hopeful!! Loved this one.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hopeful, romantic, and soooooo beautiful!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine's here Wonderful write! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I echo the others on how romantic it is. Great write here. So simplistic and yet profound in that fact. Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Very romantic, I agree. A very lovely write. *smile* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah! Beautiful write here Walker! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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