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Kiss Me
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Kiss Me |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Kiss Me Kiss me just once, let our lips softly brush ~ Feel the heat rise from so gentle a touch ~ Pull me in closer when you see my lips part ~ Deepen the kiss to connect heart to heart ~ Hold me tighter as we dance in the wind ~ Gaze into my eyes and drown in them again ~ Let our tongues dance to a rhythm uniquely ours ~ Let passion blind me in an explosion of stars ~ Float me on a whisper as we spiral, together ~ Kiss me just once but let it last forever |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! A wonderful way to enter a new home! Please check your E-mail for a special Greeting! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Such pure and gentle words from talented lips ... it pulls you in and softly caresses with the slightest touch and then drowns you in all its glory ... this is one of those that shall last forever!!! Great piece!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome Tara. This is an outstanding post, first, second...in any position I'd say the same thing, it flows very nicely, with a gentle strength. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Beautiful first post Tara! I'll be watching for more from you! ~Nancy Lee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
I've forgotten how warm the welcomes are here. I used to post under "Tara Simms" but got a new member id due to my recent marriage. Thanks for your replies! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tara~ So good to see you with a new smile in your life~ 'Float me on a whisper as we spiral, together ~ Kiss me just once but let it last forever' This is just sooooooooo lovely~ *Hugs* and best wishes to you both~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
then welcome again and congratulations!!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful flow as this kiss progressed...James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Tara...good to see you..it's been a long time. Congratulaions on your marriage and this poem of romance is lovely! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Tara What wonderful words you have chosen for your first post and welcome to Passions. You will see many talented people here and I hope you stay awhile. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Tara, this is sooooooooo romantic! (big hugggssssss) Such sweet romance fills your angelic heart, sweet Tara! (smiles) Welcome to Passions, may you be inspired by us all here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your beautiful words! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That is a hell of a welcomekiss you gave us. Welcome to you too Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Tara, I had a feeling this was you. Congratulations on your marriage, and this beuatiful poem, as well. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hi Tara!!!  this is wonderful. . . it flows very well. . . hope to see you around. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Jeffrey E. Osborne Member
since 2001-11-01
Posts 160out there |
Tara, Welcome "back" Mrs Hall I was wondering if you were going to change the name. Although I've said it before, it seems appropriate to say it again here given your new ID - congrats on your marriage; may the two of you always find happiness in each other's arms and smiles. This poem is absolutely beautiful! A rush of romance tinged with passion that carries the reader to the promise of love at the end. Chris inspires you well! - Jeff"people say I should learn some self-control, but I just want to exorcise my soul" |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
Martie, Marge, John, Sandra, and Jeff: Thanks so much for the warm wishes. It's good to be back. I think we're getting settled into married life now...he keeps telling me I need to get back to my writing. Hopefully, I'll be posting more frequently now! Thanks for reading everyone! |
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