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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-07 09:33 PM


Sailing across imagination ocean
Anything possible in thought
True love floating there
Anchored by unconditional devotion

Rough seas are life
Calm of her embrace
Still worth the trip
Only storm in eyes

Paradise island she offers
Never lonely with two
Lovers drifting sweetly together
Holding each other's half

So I sail on
Unrelenting desire my wind
Needing her....my ship
Wanting each other....destiny



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1 posted 2001-11-07 09:47 PM


*sigh* she will be one very lucky lady when you find her, Sir Robert. This is romantically beautiful and easily makes the heart flutter.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-07 09:49 PM


Beautifully done Robert...watch the winds.
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3 posted 2001-11-07 09:49 PM




(big hugggsssssss) You will find her, and she will be so very happy to share your loving heart! (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful and lovely, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-11-07 10:09 PM


Very romantic.  Oh to be loved in such a way!  Excellent, Robert.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-11-07 10:28 PM


I am set adrift on your words. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Robert William Gruhn
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6 posted 2001-11-07 11:16 PM


Thanking all of you for your wonderful expressionistic comments! Robert


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7 posted 2001-11-08 09:22 AM


A beautiful romantic poem. Enjoyed reading.
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8 posted 2001-11-08 09:28 AM


Your work is so very romantic.  Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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9 posted 2001-11-08 10:45 AM


Swooning..from just reading about the journey..of your ocean cruise lines... Good bait for a beautiful ocean creature..
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