Open Poetry #16 |
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Hidden From The World |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada ![]() |
Hidden From the World A man of action, like no other like magic he brings love’s light, a heart held out with open hand, spirits not new but bound together, two souls burning ever bright He weaves a lover’s spell bringing tears to dry eyes, words of power and celebration, writing from a heart of feeling, hearing hurt heart’s painful cries Warm embrace with open arms, teaching lessons with loving caring, bringing light to fill dark places, wiping tears from wet faces, reaching out to all and sharing Voice is heard as heart is given, lover’s voice sets her on fire, joy and gladness ringing true, flowing with fire and passion, sounds that could never tire A boy, a man, a lover, a friend, he is all and more as she explores, a heart hurt hard from past’s pain, she embraces him with her soul, take love offered she implores All this and more stays Hidden From the World A man whose heart Lives for and loves all that’s true Karen Torbiak© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Karen Such wonderful words of romance you weave. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely! ~Tier |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
wow Karen.....you are amazing me...just cranking the romance out one after another. this is beautiful...really beautiful. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Karen this is awesome.You are such a romantic and I love it. Peaches |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen! You have done it once again. Queen of romance....you are! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Lady Karen, this was an absolutely beautifully written romantic piece, as is your beautiful smile sweet damsel, thank you for introducing me to this more than wonderful poetry forum! Your knight and poet! Sir Robert |
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