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0 posted 2001-11-07 05:11 PM




When Angels Sing
By: Noah Eaton
11/7/01

In the marriage of golden spirits
Roseate cheeks caressed by silver wings
Icicles dancing like sparrows in the heavens
Sheep eyes humming sweet romantic recitings

Heaven’s gate opening before every soulmate
Daisies dancing in waves of caramel hair, shimmering and dew-kissed
Lovely lady, my spirits ascend to your love today
Together may we drink from this porcelain chalice

Now as I caress your heart, I feel unconditional love’s alchemy
I see the garden in your eyes, tittering with butterflies
Hearing the thrush in your lips sing, your hearts sprites trilling
Lilies and cherry blossoms swaying as you lovingly cry

Your sweet voice is what makes angels sing
Touch me, my love, I’ll share with you this moonlight kiss
Your heart beats beautifully, as do church bells ring
I’ll love you forever, for our hearts have embraced in lovers kismet…



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-07 06:26 PM


Noah this may be the most beautiful one yet.
Such a romantic soul you have.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-11-07 06:28 PM


Very romantic, Noah.  Write on.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2001-11-07 06:29 PM


Such beautiful images of love expressed here, Noah.  

PS I had to highlight the yellow print in order to see it...may I suggest you change the color?  

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4 posted 2001-11-07 07:14 PM


Noah,
I think this is the most beautiful one yet.Your words touch my heart and soul.One day you will find her and she will be everything you dreamed of and more.You write
beautifully.my dear sweet friend.
Peaches

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5 posted 2001-11-07 08:43 PM


Beautiful once again. My sis is about to read her email. (hugs)
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6 posted 2001-11-07 08:51 PM


Romantically beautiful, Noah. The angels will all sing when you find you sweet love.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-11-07 09:03 PM


The words of an angel are present here in this piece my dear brother, that is how this poet and friend sees your writings! Robert
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