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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-07 08:46 PM


Loneliness waved generously goodbye
Leaving its only gift
For one last time
A moment of solitude



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The Lady of Shallot
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1 posted 2001-11-07 08:47 PM


poignant thoughts and puts a lot of images in my mind this evening....I...I have to go to bed...I can't read anymore right now. Thank you for this.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Startime
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2 posted 2001-11-07 08:49 PM


You know sometimes I love to sit by a stream in solitude and just listen to all around me. This poem made me think of how beautiful that kind of loneliness is. Magnificent writing, Robert. I love the whole feel of it.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RSWells
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3 posted 2001-11-07 08:50 PM


Undoubtedly a left handed wave. Solitude has it's moments and it's peace can comfort. Over time the loneliness fades I'm finding. Enjoyed, welcome to passions.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-11-07 08:51 PM




(sigh) And the sweet golden silence of comfort and peace will follow the absence of loneliness shadowed by joy and love! (smiles) BRAVO SWEET BROTHER!!! Your words are always such a pleasure to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet knight, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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