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Nighttime Poet
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Nighttime Poet |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Nighttime Poet… He never sleeps…wandering empty halls through the night having awakened while reaching in a dream, reaching for a heart hovering in a fog just beyond his grasp The silence, screaming words in poetic verse, echoes throughout him. Haunted by the resounding hollow of the beating of his own heart, he purges his soul. With scalpel like pen, he reveals the workings of his passions, delicately dismembering yearnings for romance, falling to the seduction of yet another sleepless night of echoes. achildsheart 11-07-01 this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a good read!!!!!!!! |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
This is wonderful! One suggestion: you wrote "wondering the halls"--did you mean "wandering the halls"? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ 'With scalpel like pen, he reveals the workings of his passions, delicately dismembering yearnings for romance, falling to the seduction of yet another sleepless night of echoes.' This is just lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fabulous write. I loved it. It fit into my insomnia  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
everyone, thanks. It seems so many write and/or post late at night, soooooo. Tara, thanks for pointing out the typo. this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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