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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The bar’s near empty Maggie May is playing on the jukebox no surprise it’s brought someone to mind I wonder what song will someday remind me of you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Duncan~ Gosh .... are you reading my mind or what ? Well .... you've got the short edition down-pat~  I just love this~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Well, maybe the old tune "Devil or Angel, I can't Make Up My Mind" Do you know that one? |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I like this. I have written on some bar napkins in my time, may have them still kicking around somewhere. Hhmmm, wonder what song it will be... If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
My head was empty as my kitchen Except for the melody stuck inside All I could do was listen But the words didn’t want to hide So I wrote to the silent note On a paper towel that was handy But not to someone There wasn’t any Enjoyed the poetry of yours Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I have always kept selected songs close to my heart. Sometimes while driving or running, a song will come on the radio and catch me off guard. It's always a good feeling though isn't it? nice write Duncan. this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
ah, yes, Maggie May, Yes, I loved that song and everyone should have a song that reminds them of someone they love. I'm listening to one right now.... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I have a song for each someone special kept in my heart  I like this very much |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan--You got my memory going with this one...for in my yourth there was always a "our song" in a romance...and the song lasted long after the romance was gone. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Duncan, the song for you to remember me, presupposing you'd even want to, is: "I am a man of constant sorrow" by the Foggy Bottom Boys |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good one, Duncan, sent us all down memory lane here. I have a few special songs that remind me of each person I have loved, and sometimes they make me smile, sometimes cry, depending on how strong I feel that day. And I have scribbled on bar napkins a few times, too. Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Making me laugh...done this a few times and restaurant and fast food napkins and paper bags...James |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
They're playing our song tonight don't know the words, but it sure feels right everytime I hear this melody I want to hold you close to me listen, they're playing our song... Nice write, Duncan... *smiles* ~Tier |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* well I know the one that suits me right now and even though I don't like country music much this one fills me with life. "Man! I Feel Like A Woman!" by Shania Twain. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Duncan- this is very poetic,songs are like poetry and when they reminds us of someone,it's like our special poem about them. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
My ex-wife confessed that some canine song Elvis used to sing reminded her of me...  |
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