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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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It’s felt like years since I could say I’ve done my very best today I got lost tryin’ to get away And now I don’t know where to go From love and life I feel apart How heavy weighs my father’s heart I want to dad, I want to start But now I don’t know where to go And every day the sun sets quicker Left me in darkness one day sicker The pile of work now one day thicker And still I don’t know where to go My friends, they reach out just to hold me I heard the things you three times told me I need your ears, not you to scold me I wish I knew which way to go So here I turn to words again And re-read places I have been The memories of where and when I still don’t know, but here I go [This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So hear I turn to words again And re-read places I have been The memories of where and when I still don’t know, but here I go This is deep, I liked this. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
buddy, I know the feeling. We all feel lost sometimes, maybe that's why I come here from time to time to read...it lets me know I'm not alone. Dennis |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You'll find your way eventually Nice poem Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I don't know...I went through a place not too long ago in my past when I didn't know where I was and where I was going...I felt out of place...like I didn't belong...it was a terrible feeling...don't know how I got out of there but time does change situations and circumstance...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Kevin.... I been lost so long its starting to feel like home.... and all I could think while I read this was "you been here too few years to feel this old"(mb20) ... but your honest aching emotive words wrapped in rhyme touch me... proof of a well written poem. we have to look inside our selves for the answers and then hope we can accept the reasons. Take care of you poet sir. jm |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Kevin, I can relate to this feeling ever so clearly, for I too am close to starting my college life, and I am not sure and anxious of where to go! (sigh) But I know deep down, a slong as you follow your loving heart and listen to your rhythm, you will find all the happiness you could ever dream of! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Kevin,excellent writing.I could feel every emotion.I have been lost over the years from things that have past.I'm now starting to realize follow your heart and soul and you'll be lost no more.I hope you find everything you desire. Peaches |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin~ very deep poem. i relate to this more than i can say...i too feel lost and am just now starting to find my way. take care of yourself hon, be strong and remember you do have lots of friends who care about you. take care amy  "I could kiss you in |
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