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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-11-06 07:50 PM


Oh fisherman you've got me on a hook
A little bit of persistence is all it took
You waited on me so patiently
And I awaited you to take me from the sea
Nothing like a great fisherman looking proud
I'd like to go home with you if I'm allowed
A pic of us is taken as you hold me
It proves your story when it's told of me
You happily exclaim that I'm a great catch
And that every fisherman wants a fish like me
But there arent many in the deep blue sea
Suddenly you begin to tell me what I lack
You crave a bigger fish
Without warning you toss me back
Down to the bottom of my home I go
If only I was a shark
I'd chew apart your boat...


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1 posted 2001-11-06 07:55 PM


*giggling* well too bad you didn't have sharp teeth to give him a big bite. You hooked me from the start of this poem. It is a perfect delight to read.    

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-11-06 07:57 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, I know this feeling ever so well! (big hugggsssss) You always write so wonderfully! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


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3 posted 2001-11-06 09:52 PM


LOL.  

Finicky fishermen,
you better watch out
don't toss your line into
South Florida seas
where Rose Petals
are floating.

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