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Open Poetry #16

The Big Thirst

Dom Mart
Member

since 1999-08-17

Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 2001-11-06 07:44 AM

Upon my plate, a large trout lay.
It's eye was black and fishy.
When I put my fork into it,
It seemed a trifle squishy.

"Waiter," I asked,"Has this fish
Been properly prepared?"
Just then a cry rose from the plate,
"Some water quick, I'm scared."

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

1 posted 2001-11-06 07:30 PM

Cute poem!
Gave me a smile

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-11-06 07:32 PM

ROFL. Too funny!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-11-06 07:45 PM

This is too funny!!

Good write and some excellent comic relief at a time we can all use a little. ~hugs, Nancy~

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-11-06 08:47 PM

True to form, Dom! I always look forward to seeing you here!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-11-06 09:28 PM

YIKES!!!!!
That poor fishie. Funny, but not for the fish.

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