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Open Poetry #16

Elfin Forest Rainbows

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-06 11:36 AM

On the horizon of a fairytale where
feathered ponies prance atop
verse of rhyme, her dreams find reality
in the midst of an elfin forest

rising, in dawn’s fashion, from a wishing well,
a knight to soar her through downy
clouds of sweetest illusion

musicbox melodies trail behind them
leaving pastel dust bending to rainbows.

achildsheart
11-06-01

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-06 12:19 PM

BRAVO!

I really like this fantasy tale, complete with music and pastel dust. Excellent, a keeper for me.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

2 posted 2001-11-06 05:44 PM

Thanks, I am really happy you liked this.....

Look into the eyes of a man and
you will find the soul of the woman
who loves him...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-06 09:59 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh my gosh, this is so so beautiful! (smiles) You always weave love and magic so beautifully! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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