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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-11-06 03:16 PM

It’s early morning
The fog is still spread
Across the lake
In a white blanket
Shreds of poetry
Echo in my mind
These symbols I create
To represent who I am
Invoked in the chants
And icons of life
In the reality
Of hidden veils
adorned in
The beauty of capturing

evanescent angels

Sliding through rainbows
Floating just out of sight
Yet, I feel you,
Hover on the edge
Of my vision, on the
Edge of my sanity
Again I remember
The path of a thousand nights
And days
Closing my eyes
Tasting the sky
Sipping the rain
The path we
Traveled in silent
Years of simplicity
I’ve felt it
Fluttering as one
On the sound of
Your wings

~~

*****

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-06-2001).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-06 03:20 PM

Lauren...This just took my breath away!
Beautiful write, thank you for this one.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-11-06 03:20 PM

Beautiful...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-06 03:32 PM

Gosh Lauren, this one just sparkles with beautiful imagery! Making me greeneyed! Actually, my eyes are hazel

Thanks for this wonderful painting.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-11-06 04:14 PM

Sliding through rainbows
Floating just out of sight
Yet, I feel you,
Hover on the edge
Of my vision, on the
Edge of my sanity
Again I remember
The path of a thousand nights
And days
Closing my eyes
Tasting the sky
Sipping the rain
The path we
Traveled in silent
Years of simplicity
I’ve felt it
Fluttering as one
On the sound of
Your wings
===========================

and now..by the gift of your equisite whispered words...
we feel it too ...
thank you for that sweet poetess L.

I can be your hero baby ... I will kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever ... you still take my breath away ...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2001-11-06 06:49 PM

Beautiful poetry...James

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

6 posted 2001-11-06 06:58 PM

I knew you had a gift for imagery and you've proved it once again. The title is exquisite and the rest of the piece as well. Very nice!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-06 07:42 PM

Lovely write, Lauren. The images are superb!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-11-06 08:34 PM

shhhhhhhhhh. . . I can hear them. . .

soft from you Lauren. . . wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

9 posted 2001-11-06 08:44 PM

*sigh*
oohh..this is simply beautiful!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2001-11-06 09:03 PM

Lauren,

Beautiful? Yes! The way this flows it really is so much like flying, or perhaps a leaf floating might be a better description. Either way, it's absolutely lovely, my friend. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Robert A
Member

since 2001-10-29

Posts 174

11 posted 2001-11-08 11:32 AM

neat thoughts coming into play here missy

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2001-11-11 12:08 PM

thanks one and all, I appreciate your thoughts and comments....much....

be well be safe, love and peace to all....

Greeneyes~

*****

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-11-2001).]

JAR
Junior Member

since 2001-11-06

Posts 34

13 posted 2001-11-11 12:17 PM

As I said before
I sit and ponder your
words
wonderful write from you.
JAR

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