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analysing my displeasure
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analysing my displeasure |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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In the midst of the conversation, you suddenly asked which course i was enrolled in. I was flabbergasted Of course, there are various facets of my personality and i can't expect you to understand all of me Couldn't help feeling disappointed that you don't remember something so elementary Couldn't help feeling disgusted at the way I inevitably judge my friends by such mundane yardsticks |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh self analyzation can make yuh feel ugly |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
agreed..  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I agree with this Peaches |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yep. You judge with the measure of your own mind. Damned annoying, ain't it?  sigh...loved this for the wisdom here. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've looked into that mirror before, and didn't like the reflection. I like the way you write, with such blatent open honesty. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you, thank you...i always feel better after reading such supporting remarks... i will continue to judge myself, i guess and hopefully i will evovle to be a "Better Man"... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Even though it may hurt to look at our shortcomings it is good to focus on oneselve and not so much on others because we can only change ourselves and as you say become a better person for it..James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it can indeed only make you better my friend. . . excellent work. . . open and honest. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I think we've all done this at one time or another. You pour your heart out only to discover they haven't heard a thing you've said! The truest friends will remember every detail. All writing comes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you for reading me and for your thoughtful comments... Lone wolf, that was what i felt but i felt that i might be petty too... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
faterider, Yeah, well, like you're the Lone Ranger! Good job. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
WELL said and pointedly true....Don't we all feel that way at times. |
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