Open Poetry #16 |
In Her Bedroom |
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Behind closed doors where dust bunnies occasionally peek out from under ruffled bed skirts...her sighs of passion send them scurrying to hide in cozy corners Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Some beds hide dust bunnies under them Others have monsters or an imaginary friend, To others it's just a dark place and nothing more, Me I put my mattress firmly on the floor. Gloom |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How nice and easily sensual Well done! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
easily sensual? I like that thank you lope.... Pro. thank you, I am glad you liked this. Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Well no wonder she's too tired to dust... Enjoyed! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is wonderful! And thanks to 'loper, I didn't miss this little dust devil of delight. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nice Annie! Softly sensual! Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend! (smiles) The joys of lve always fill your sweet words, sweet Annie! (kiss on cheek) I love them all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Intriquing title...scared bunnies. Odd combination but it works. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
thanks everyone, I really DO appreciate the comments. Love "no wonder she's too tired to dust" still giggling over that. this woman's soul drowned in the shallow waters of a man's heart. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
How'd you know? I have those man eaters under my bed! This is really a keeper! I will read this to my Hubby tonight and smack him for tellin'! Very wonderful! Sincerely, Regina |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
oes the fact thathy are bunnies have anything to do with there productive theme? cute. J |
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