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Where were you....you didn't know me.
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Where were you....you didn't know me. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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When I was so alone When I thought no one cared When I had no one to talk to Why weren’t you there When I slept fitful dreams Those nights alone in my truck The panic of my fears The crying, sadness, tears You were not there The times I thought I couldn’t live. The hours, weeks, months alone The silence of an unanswered phone My family I didn’t have I didn’t know you The weeks of talks and words Hours of working two jobs Fears of losing all I had You didn’t know me My words that speak of a heart My mind that feels happiness My joy of being with them Our love growing You are here Thank You for loving me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My words that speak of a heart My mind that feels happiness My joy of being with them Our love growing You are here Thank You for loving me ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah Magnus! This is wonderful and the final passage says it all! I love it of course. Oh...your coffee is getting cold.  ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
it's all you need, just all you ever need...you are SO blessed! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Your sweet loving heart shines here! She loves you so very much, and will always! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this poem is soooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy....enjoying the coffee...these were real feelings that I felt during a very tumultuous time in my life a few years ago. A time I needed and found out who I really was and who my friends truly were. Also when I found out how deep my love for and from my family was.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lady of S...even though I had many moments when I thought I was not loved...it became very much obvious to me that I was...It just took time to understand that....Now I know...more than ever...YES...I am blessed. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah...learn to love your family... for...even though you may not always agree.. you will some day grow to understand how deep love can be...after the anger is gone. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I've felt this way before, Magnus. Not a pleasant feeling to say the least. The one thing you always have no matter what else life bring is your family. They should be appreciated and loved. NIce work. All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LW...you are right... IF I wrote my feelings at the level I felt them then...this would probably be on the dark side forum....Some very difficult moments. [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 11-08-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I connected with many of the feelings in this great verse of struggle...and I love what we both found in the end! It was worth it then...very nicely done Magnus. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Regina...I am glad that I could share some feelings which I experienced...knowing there are others who have experienced similar ones. Thank you for your sincerity... Barry |
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