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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-08 08:03 PM




Blue Rose


Blue rose
Loves true flower
Pure as a sapphire
Shining with rare sheer faithfulness
Laced in lilac velvet
Moist in loves kiss
For you…




Whispers

Whispers
Loves soft wishes
Lighting lovers sweet dreams
Declaring eternal love through time
Promises echoing
In a touched heart
Of love…



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1 posted 2001-11-08 08:21 PM


Noah,

    I like these I have some I've been working on.. they are fun to do    

Hugs,
Tara


jwesley
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2 posted 2001-11-08 08:33 PM


Lovely my friend...pardon my stupidy, and this isn't in jest,  but are they a particular type of poetry - I mean I always see folks write in a particular frame - is this one too??

jwesley

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3 posted 2001-11-08 09:00 PM


Noah, these are lovely sweetie.  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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4 posted 2001-11-08 09:33 PM


Beautifully done, Noah.  You writing flows so smoothly!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-11-08 09:53 PM


Oooh I like these dear friend! You're a true romantic! Keep the beautiful works coming.
You ALWAYS put a smile on my face.

Love,
RP

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6 posted 2001-11-08 10:34 PM


Beautiful writing, as always Noah. And I don't know how to do this form either.
Sandra

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