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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-11-06 12:49 PM

Funny, how the way it seems...
"I'm beautiful"--"the stuff of dreams"
and yet I'm lonely anyway--
they talk--and then they run away...

Funny, oh yes, it's a scream--
I'm nuts upon the whipped cream...
then answer me, and hear my say,
why am I alone each day?

Funny girl, oh funny me,
I laugh as I bleed prayer on knees--
tell me what is wrong with me?
Why do they laugh? Why do I bleed?
(There is something wrong with me...)
The choices I make reject me.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2001-11-06 01:03 PM

I’m not funny,
I’m not sunny or laughter,
People think of me
And a frown follows after,

The choices I make reject me.

A line I know by harsh lessons.

Enjoyed this very much.

Gloom

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-11-06 01:10 PM

hey you...don't know why our compatible depression amuses me but it does (does that cancel out depression?) Me very confused, gloom, but love you! thanks

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-06 01:34 PM

Are we a collection of 'Funny' ones? I enjoyed this, as I've been rejected often enough that I thought maybe I had a monoploy on this market. OOPS, giving away my secrets again.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-11-06 02:06 PM

You are just too much woman for them
just too much intensity for lesser men
They laugh in effort to hide their fear...
for they know they cant keep up with you my dear

~~~

You are not the nuts...youre the cherry on top

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-11-06 02:24 PM

Can almost see you...laughing with one eye, crying from the other. That was an interesting image! Something tells me you've rejected a few of your own. You write depression very well. Hey, that's something.

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2001-11-06 03:43 PM

Perhaps it's not you....but your choices

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-11-06 04:16 PM

What Balladeer said in spades!
~*~
wait until chosen
quickly your life becomes fine
toast the two lovers

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2001-11-06 04:27 PM

Karen, very well done! Enjoyed!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-11-07 07:28 PM

it's not you. . . well, it is a little. . .but, it's just more. . . life. . . you know it well. . .

I think that you're beginning to read my mind these days. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2001-11-08 06:19 AM

Hey hon, I echo all that JM said PLUS...
you're GORGEOUSand FUNNY and INTELLIGENT and PASSIONATE a BRILLIANT POET
and MY friend.

Love ya!

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 11-08-2001).]

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