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Martie
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0 posted 2001-11-07 03:17 PM



Catch Me

Catch me I’m falling
into the grass green with dew
the sun my giggle

The memory is
clover in a hand holding
fragrant with a smile

Melody is ripe
in the trees above me green
covered with apples

Mother of my youth
tell me your four leaf truth now
Uncover my ears

© Copyright 2001 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-07 03:20 PM


We do wait too long to listen don't we?

Well done

I love it.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2001-11-07 03:24 PM



I'll catch these senryus and play tag with you, Martie girl...

giggles come lightly
Martie's mists are lovely rays
rainbowing my days

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just out of reach
3 posted 2001-11-07 04:30 PM


Martie - lovely as always. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2001-11-07 04:39 PM


I love the feeling that goes along with this one, Martie, feeling free!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

[This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 11-07-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-11-07 05:07 PM


Martie, Yes...I like the carefree feeling you captured here.  
Enjoyed!  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

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6 posted 2001-11-07 05:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Such precious memories and carefree muses fill this beautiful poem, sweet Martie! Your thoughts are always such a pleasure to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2001-11-08 05:25 AM


Martie~

Lookie here at you
Quipping through the Senryu
Oh, Martie ... too cool~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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