| Open Poetry #16 |
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Catch Me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California
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Catch Me Catch me I’m falling into the grass green with dew the sun my giggle The memory is clover in a hand holding fragrant with a smile Melody is ripe in the trees above me green covered with apples Mother of my youth tell me your four leaf truth now Uncover my ears |
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Interloper![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
We do wait too long to listen don't we? Well done ![]() I love it. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I'll catch these senryus and play tag with you, Martie girl... giggles come lightly Martie's mists are lovely rays rainbowing my days |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Martie - lovely as always. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
I love the feeling that goes along with this one, Martie, feeling free! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- [This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 11-07-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie, Yes...I like the carefree feeling you captured here. Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Such precious memories and carefree muses fill this beautiful poem, sweet Martie! Your thoughts are always such a pleasure to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Lookie here at you Quipping through the Senryu Oh, Martie ... too cool~ *Hugs*~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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