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Petals Beyond The Window |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Petals Beyond The Window ~*Marge Tindal*~  Beyond the window, with shades drawn there came a fragrance on the dawn Sweet recall of rose in bloom sweeping fragrance of perfume across my morn of mourning One short year you've been gone left to soon - gone too long I feel your spirit - see a trace of sunlight that seems out of place Beckoning me to windowed pain slats in open once again There caressing the window pane soft pink petals of memories blossoming just as you promised~ Graphic by Dan Heller ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Lovely sentiment, I ejoyed the softness of your words and emotions. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I feel your spirit - see a trace of sunlight that seems out of place Marge---So beautifully painful. I hope it gets warm and sunny in your world today. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'There caressing the window pane soft pink petals of memories blossoming just as you promised' This is absolutely beautiful, Marge...you've done that gorgeous pic justice, and then some! Wonderful write, my friend... sp  And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your poetry always touches my heart, Marge. Roses of remembrance bring a scent of peacefulness. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Touching and beautifully done, Marge! Lovely! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I still have a lei hanging in my living room that a woman friend gave me about nine months ago...it holds good memories...I suppose I should throw it away...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Dear Marge, This is just a beautiful poem It could stand for anything worth remembring Thanks sweet lady for posting it. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Marge, this is so so sad yet so beautifully expressed! (sad sigh) My heart cries out to your loss, though I know the love and sweet memories will last always! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet Marge, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) Your compassion always shine sin your words and your loving heart beats with faith! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is so tender and touching. A truly lovely poem! Betty Lou Hebert |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A beautiful promise well kept...still there is soft aching in this...very well written Marge...seems like silver heart strings... Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a poem filled with softness and pain. You have made the vision of it come alive so that I could feel the total effect of you words. Absolutely stunning.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful and touching Marge. Very very well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
As tender as beautiful as the rose-and the memories it holds-is this poem. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
beautiful marge so tender your touch love it warrior |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge~ The image alone speaks volumes, and yet you bring so much more of it alive and put a story behind it that melts your heart. Beautifully expressed as well as presented sweet lady, it touched my heart. Hugs, ~Krista  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Margie, you are one heartstring tugger!! This is precious  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
across my morn of mourning ... Beckoning me to windowed pain slats in open once again This has such soft beauty... loss painted with poetic perfection... and then the beautiful promise fulfilled. Wonderful! *S* |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, This is one of my favorites by far. It is so pretty, with thoughts that I can relate to. I will be keeping this one in my library. Hugs, Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BlueSerenade~ Thank you very much~ Duncan~ It was a lovely sight ... full of the moment of inspiration~ SnowPants~ Thanks, hon~ The combination of the photo and a pink memory shared with me just made for the sweetest poetry~ MidniteSun~ Thank you, sweet lady~ Denise~ Hugs ... I so appreciate you~ JamesMichael~ If it holds 'good memories', keep it sweetie~ Titia~ Thank you for seeing the layering of this one~ Noah~ Thank you~ BettyLou~ *smiling gently* here~ Thank you sweet friend~ RWood~ 'soft aching' pretty well sums it up, my friend~ Thank you~ StarTime~ Awwww ! Thank you, hon~ Enchantress~ Thanks so very much~ Elizabeth~ I so enjoy your replies~ Thanks, gal~ SoaringEagle~ Love you, my sweet friend~ SmittenKitten~ Thank you, sweetie~ Balladeer~ You're so sweet to me~ Thank you sweetheart~ BloomingRose~ I so appreciate that~ Thank you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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