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{{{ The Daisies of My Heart }}}
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{{{ The Daisies of My Heart }}} |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 ~*~ Daisies of my heart ~*~ I’d give you a daisy Today Look at it Closely Try to figure What does it say… The white tiny petals Holding the yellow heart In its peak Oh… how many words does it speak? Can you count? Can you figure? Would you silently seek The secrets Hidden within this fragile figure? But What secrets lie in that heart When it is too shining Too clear from the start? Easily seen Never really hidden By the petals. Too pure To know The dangers Of being exposed so You looked at me And silently asked Why a daisy Why? Oh… Hush…. And try Listen to the unuttered sigh And learn The secret guarded Close by A daisy, sir Would perfectly tell Of the heart That hide within me In its cell Small… It’s true Lost When it is held by you White… Indeed Telling of the Pure innocence That resides In its seed Fragile… Yes… Yet strong So beware And keep it safe From all wrong A daisy.... I give you today Did you realize finally What does it say? ~~~*~~~~~*~~~~~*~~~~~*~~~~~*~~~~ ~~~*~~~~*~~~~*~~~~~ ~~~*~~~*~~~~ ~~~*~~~ ~~~ * Thank you [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 11-06-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I will be looking at daisys in a whole new light. This is a keeper... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Walker~ Thank you for reading it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Alan~ Yes...enjoy looking at daisies...for they are always a joy. Thank you for your kind words.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
It speaks of the simplest wisdom which is always within us and around us though we blindly seek it. It is a wisdom which binds the universe together and which our world so desparately needs to receive and give in these modern times. This poem resonates with this enchanting frequency and plays a haunting and unforgetable melody to remind its readers of the beauty within.  -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchanted, I prefer daisies to lillies. Enjoyed. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~MArk~ Wisdom in the heart of a simple, pure daisy!... indeed. There is so much truth in what you have said.. Thank you sooooo much dear friend as always...and more... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Seymour~ I too love daisies so much.. Thank you for reading it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is incredible. You have developed the daisy heart metaphor so nicely! I will add this to my favorites, to read on cold and melancholy nights. Very refreshing. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Midnitesun~ The thought of a daisy is always refreshing...isn't it? Thank you so much for your kind words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melody, you have done so many lovely flower poems, I cannot choose my favorite. This speaks to my heart, as they all do. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nice work, Enchanted Melody. The daisy is a beautiful flower indeed.  All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
surely my friend, the garden of your heart is a wonderful place to be. . . well done. . . the meanings come through loud and clear. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful and gorgeous! (smiles) You are a true daisy to us all, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Sandra~ I believe in the language of flowers in so many ways...and how they speak to us. I'm so so glad that you loved them all dear friend. Thank you dearly ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Lone Wolf~ Thank you so much for reading it... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sven~ Is it dear friend?  Here are some daisies from it...  Thank you sooo much dear friend ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Noah~ Dear friend ...you truly touch my heart with your sweet replies... Thank you soooooooooooooooo much for your wonderful and kind words... (Kiss on the cheek).. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness! Another lovely poem on flowers! This was as sweet and fresh as a daisy!  EA  |
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