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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Editing by virtue, experience, self denial tongue held ever the right choice over speaking wrongly in the morning waking without regret you may ask I may not answer again, sleeping with my own innocence |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes you just have to bite that tongue, right or wrong. Probably a wise move. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
a little early for me to get the full meaning of this, but it is very well written. edit me to your desire.... Look into the eyes of a man and |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Okay, I'll ask...watcha been editing??? Or are you talking about someone else's editing?...surely not...do other people edit?? LOL. Interesting poem Duncan, lots to ponder. Is editing a good idea or not?...hmmm...maybe I'll have to come back and edit this!! LOL. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sometimes editing our emotions or urges seems to work best for our peace of mind. Great psychological poem. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Yes, editing. It is a blessing. Because once you are beyond editing and the words are already read or heard, it's too late. Some poems made me think and reflect, this one did. Thank you for posting it. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's amazing how some times, there's a whole lot of editing going on! Well done, Sir! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
concise..and pointed...as usual I find your words to be highly enjoyable and the form excellent..nice work! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yep - Sleep - Write - Edit... at will - Good philosophy..  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* Oh WELL said. I am finally starting to learn about editing and about time too I say.  Great writing. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Self-editing. You make a good point. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Editing is much easier than going back and trying to erase....love your style. |
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