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Open Poetry #16

River Flow

WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

0 posted 2001-11-05 12:05 PM

RIVER FLOW

I
prepare
to receive the flow
in the Spring
of my passion
for I AM
the valley receiving.

I
join
the wild tumble;
bend to the call
of the water
for I AM
the river flowing.

Together
we give life,
maintain balance
create harmony,
in times
calm or turbulent.

Thus love,
as wild irises
blossoms
forever marking
the path
of our joining
in the endless
flow.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2001-11-05 12:28 PM

This was picture perfect Windwalker.
I loved the peacefulness and tranquil setting.

There was a wonderful calm and soothing effect to your words.

Very nice!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-11-05 12:30 PM

Nice stream of poetic words
enjoyed,

Gloom

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-05 12:49 PM

Peaceful, flowing, cleansing. And I like irises.

Alan
Senior Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

4 posted 2001-11-06 08:23 AM

Beautifully done Windwalker I like the style you used in this one

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-11-06 09:00 AM

*sigh* how I love the river. In the spring it is so filled with unleashed passion as it swells from the winter's rest and in the summer it is lazy and soothing to the spirit. *sigh* I love the way it makes my spirit feel. Well done, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

mirror man
Senior Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

6 posted 2001-11-06 03:02 PM

I like this.

[This message has been edited by mirror man (edited 11-06-2001).]

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