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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
With steeled resolve I'll break down her defense and thence I'll connect with her innermost being . 'Tis no easy conquest by any sense yet, in her sweet curves it is love that I'm seeing . Her brown skin so firm responds to my touch . Plucked from her home now her fate has been sealed . Resistance is met with more force for it's such that she must expect and will cause her to yeild . Some few may think I am callous for this . That the use of force cannot be justified . While true in most instances, when they resist, I've found it's better if more is applied . If there were more like her I'd do them as well . We might be nuts, but, I don't eat the shell . |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, were you eating Brazil nuts, walnuts??? You had me wondering there for a minute. A good twisted nutty tale to squirrel away for a rainy day. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Dr.Moose~Hehehe ![]() ![]() Hugs, ~Krista ![]() Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
We're all nuts, Walnuts, we're all nuts. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well from these words I can conclude that either you love hard nuts or hard to get women...or both...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Absolutely nutty. *giggling* Very cute writing. ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Ha! An admitted nut case! Goofy Moosey . . . I love it! "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Cute write Doc. And I like James reply up there!!! lol If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
They are sooo worth the effort, though, aren't they? Delightfully nutty poem, Doc! |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
LOL! I get it!!! Great write thanks for sharing! ~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!? |
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