Open Poetry #16 |
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Unchained Melody |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() UNCHAINED MELODY I will stand in the mist, weep in the rain, bow to the sea as it roars! I am writing the notes as they resonate free from the heavens and over the moors! I am hearing the voice of a person who loved me- the woman, the inner child. Please listen; just listen, and you’ll hear yours too for you see it is there all the while. Yes, a muse can be metaphor tied to a memory- lines, an ethereal clef. But no lyrical muse can reach into your soul if your thoughts and your feelings are deaf. So play ye with honor and play ye with grace; we are poets and maestros with pen! Break all your chains and you’ll write through eternity- linking your peace from within. Emily This is for my mom, whom I want to be proud of me. [This message has been edited by emily (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() ![]() Exactly! What a beautiful inspirational poem. (And I get to add my own music, my own rhythm and harmony.) THANK YOU. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and why wouldn't she be??? these are words well sung, and well heard. . . great job. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Your words sing with perfect melody while play a vision of how we are for us to see. The inner child has much to share with the one they love. BRAVO!!! I love it. ![]() ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-05-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah! The inner child is not hidden very far below the surface. This is wonderful! Emily! I just love it!! Thank you for this gem! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
thanks! My mom's in heaven but I still want her to be proud of me and I hope that she is! Emily |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A beautiful write... "Unchained Melody" is a very special song ... ![]() Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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