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Moonstruck - shape poem
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Moonstruck - shape poem |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet 
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there like a beacon, you call to me, and when I sleep my mind wanders and I answer your call. In my dreams I fly to the moon and bounce freely through the dust. I roll in it until it covers me like soot. The man on the moon, gives me a wink and I sigh, never wanting to leave, but knowing that always I will return. Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 A very good poem, well presented. |
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Sinister Handed Member
since 2001-08-05
Posts 58 |
I have a feeling the man on the moon sighs just as much as you when you leave. Beautiful poem and perfect layout. Love you! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yesh, good descriptions... The full moon does make ppl have wild fantasy-like dreams, doesnt it? ^.^ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This is very cool. Can't see the moon here tonight, so thanks for sharing yours. |
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Accordionmaid Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 153MA/USA |
I love these shape poems, but I've yet to try to write one. This is great! I was just recently playing a "bouncy moon song" that I wrote, called "Man In The Moon," two days ago. It IS a lot of fun, bouncing on around in that moon-dust.... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, you know some of my poems take a shape of their own. I like this one. |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Midnitesun~ Thank you  I think that's my first clap!SH~ Awww  You say the sweetest things. Thank you! I love you too  MonCherie~ Thank you! And yes, I think you're right Duncan~I'm glad you got to share mine then you can borrow it anytime!Accordianmaid~ You should try one They're fun to do! I would love to hear your "bouncy moon song", it sounds like just my kind of song Thank you for bouncing in and making me smile  walker~ Thank you so much And I know what you mean...sometimes those creative juices just take their own liberties!Hugs to all of you!  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like this a lot, I have never tried to shape my poems, it adds to it, I think, though the poem stands well alone too. Snadra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely work, Kitten. Much enjoyed this gem. All writing comes |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Beautifully creative and imaginative! I love these...and the verse! Sincerely, Regina |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Sandra~ Thank you for thinking it stands well alone, that is a lovely thought LoneWolf~ Thank you! For stopping in, and for calling this a "gem" Regina~ Well coming from your creative and imaginative self, I'm thrilled! Thank you!Hugs to all of you!  Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. |
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